They are brave and brilliant, and they still squabble at bedtime
Oh, my heart. I love this. That last stanza is so good.
Beautiful moments and a beautiful poem :)
Such a vibrant poem. Love the popsicle-stick fix, and the sweet detail, “We had to eat the popsicles first.” I know the feeling of watching adult children re-enact the same dynamics of their childhood. You captured it perfectly.
Mary, thank you so much for reading. Your feedback really means a lot. I'm so grateful, and happy it rang true for you.
Oh, my heart. I love this. That last stanza is so good.
Beautiful moments and a beautiful poem :)
Such a vibrant poem. Love the popsicle-stick fix, and the sweet detail, “We had to eat the popsicles first.” I know the feeling of watching adult children re-enact the same dynamics of their childhood. You captured it perfectly.
Mary, thank you so much for reading. Your feedback really means a lot. I'm so grateful, and happy it rang true for you.